After creating my first draft of the script I handed 5 copies out to classmantes and asked them for some brief feedback and possibly critisism to help improve my script further:
Michael- Good unique concept. No other game like it on the
market. Clear who the main character is but some of the centred text looks a
bit confusing
Adam- looks good. Sounds like a directed version of GTA.
Especially likes character names. The game tutorial needs to be more detailed.
Jan- Like the look of the game sounds fun to play.
Interaction with Atrox at the end sounds a little false
Josh- Great!
Llewie- Good game. Nice ideas. More detail about the one who
dies because we do not hear him enough to be sad when he dies
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